You changed the offer, the price and the ads. Nothing moved.

That usually means the problem is not what your page says. It is the order it says it in.

Find out where yours loses them Takes two minutes. Nothing to fill in.
The bit nobody checks

Before a buyer pays, eight questions have to be settled.

They settle them in their own head whether your page answers them or not. The first is recognition: is this for someone like me? The last is the decision to buy. The questions between them are where confidence, safety and certainty can disappear.

If one goes unanswered, everything after it stops counting. Your proof can be excellent and still do nothing because the reader never reached it with enough confidence to believe it.

That is why A/B testing does not always find the problem. A test compares two versions of the same page in the same order. It tells you which one won. It cannot tell you that the sequence itself is where the reader was lost.

What that costs while it stays unnamed

The traffic still arrives. It still reaches the same stopping point.

You are paying to deliver interested people to the exact point where the page blocks them.

You see it later as abandoned carts, forms not completed and forms completed but never sent.

That is the leak worth naming first. Until you know where it is, a new headline, new ad or new offer can send more people into the same problem.

What this is

A survey, not a critique.

Nobody buys a house without paying a surveyor to walk through it and list what matters, what can wait and what needs attention first. Nobody thinks the surveyor is being rude about the house.

The Locked Door Audit does that for the page you spend money sending traffic to.

You send

A link. That is the whole brief. Analytics can sharpen the diagnosis, but they are not required.

You get

All eight points scored against what is actually on your page, quoting the real line that causes each score. Plus the one thing to fix first and why it is that one.

Turnaround

Within three working days.

You keep

The scoring rules, so your team can run the same check on the next page without us.

Why you can argue with any of it

The finding has to point to the page.

A line, not a feeling

Every score quotes a real line on your page. You can disagree with any finding and inspect the reasoning for yourself.

Two accountable readers

Two people read the page against the same written rules and put their names to what they found. It is not a score generated by a tool.

Who reads your page

Two people, not a score generator.

Leanne Summers

Leanne Summers

SEO Copywriter and AI Systems Designer

Leanne is an Australian SEO Copywriter and AI Systems Designer based in Vietnam. A former lawyer, she reads a page for the line that undoes the sale in much the same way she once read a contract for the clause that undoes the rest of the document. Leanne buys things online too, and understands exactly why she bounces off a page.

Gary Cooper

Gary Cooper

Full-stack Marketer and Copywriter

Gary Cooper has spent thirty years selling and marketing consulting in eighteen countries, across finance, precious metals and cybersecurity. These are markets where the buyer often arrives suspicious, which has taught him to spot the exact line where a reader stops believing you.

Fair questions

Things you are probably thinking.

Is this just conversion optimisation?

It happens before that. Optimisation tells you which version won. This tells you which point in the sequence is worth testing first. If you already run a testing programme, this can cut out tests aimed below the real problem.

Why should I take your word for any of it?

You should not have to. Every score points at a line, and you keep the breakdown, so you can check the reasoning without us in the room.

Our page is fine. Our traffic is the problem.

It might be. The check below takes two minutes. If every point is open, buy more traffic with a clear conscience.

Who is this actually for?

Businesses already spending real money on traffic, where one page does most of the selling and repeated changes to the offer, price, creative or traffic have not moved the result. You are not short of ideas. You are short of a name for what is wrong.

What if I disagree with what you found?

Every score has to quote the line that caused it. You can challenge the finding, inspect the reasoning and decide whether the evidence earns the change.

Price

Two ways in.

Main Page Audit

$497

One page, scored with the first fix named. The fee comes off the full audit if you go further.

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Full Funnel Audit

$2,500

Ads, landing page, checkout and follow-up emails read as one sequence rather than four separate pieces.

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If a rebuild makes sense after that, we talk about it then. Not before.

Two minutes, nothing to fill in

Run the check on your own page.

Answer honestly. Nothing is stored or sent. The first No is the one that matters; everything below it goes quiet because that is what happens to the reader.

Before you pay anything

Send us the page. We will review the first one free.

We will send back the first point where the page loses confidence, with the line that does it. No call, no deck and no follow-up sequence. If the diagnosis is useful, you will know before you buy anything.

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